我把李清照的代表作“声声慢”中“寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清……”翻译为“I look for it again and again;in loneliness I try but in vainand in vain”或“My feeling is eager and strong;my memory is dim and long”自己都觉得太直白,语言魅力不足,但在英语角上几个留学生却觉得很感人。又如“一个和尚挑水吃,两个和尚抬水吃,三个和尚没水吃”翻译成“one boy is a boy;two boys is a half boy;three boys is no boy”作为英语太“迂回”了,若译为“no redundancy,no efficiency”(不精简就没效率)不仅简洁押韵,而且意思能迅速传达。